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  1. NCfan

    NCfan Porn Star

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    I think I may skip that one. Not my thing.
     
  2. MidnightWatcher

    MidnightWatcher Porn Surfer

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    Your avatar made me crack up and cry at the same time.
     
  3. mfan2112

    mfan2112 Sex Lover

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    WOW! most of the "hi guys! the sexiest girls on my page" spam comments are gone. Got one hanging out on my latest post, but the rest are gone.
     
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      I've been complaining over and over every time one shows up
       
      NCfan, Sep 15, 2020
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    2. NCfan
      Bummer, still on mine. Almost all now from SaraKras01
       
      NCfan, Sep 15, 2020
    3. mfan2112
      hmmm
       
      mfan2112, Sep 15, 2020
    4. mfan2112
      ugh, some are cropping back up.... :(
       
      mfan2112, Sep 15, 2020
    5. NCfan
      It's back. SaraKras003 now. I wish we could easily report a user ID so they could do a quick check and block
       
      NCfan, Sep 16, 2020
  4. bethsdream

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      It's a good story, but the site messed with the formatting, making it a little tough to read. I saw a handful of typos or grammar/spelling errors - your/you're - but pretty solid. Though this is a sex site and we're writing porn, I too was surprised that people cared about spelling and grammar. Who knew?
       
      NCfan, Sep 15, 2020
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  5. bethsdream

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    ty for the comments i need to work on that stuff (grammar / typos) but i wanted to try
     
    1. silenceisgolden
      Nice story ,read and left positive rating for you :)
       
      silenceisgolden, Sep 15, 2020
    2. NCfan
      bethsdream, what I do is first post it here on this forum. You won't get as many readers, but you may get comments. and since you need to format it here it gives you a chance to read through it an extra time. I can't believe how every time I reread a story I find something to fix, or change. There are a lot of people on both sites who will not give a story time if it doesn't look good.
       
      NCfan, Sep 15, 2020
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    3. mfan2112
      Agree with NCFan, although I rarely post something over here. I run everything through Grammarly.com (free account) and just got clued into the read aloud function in Word. I find a lot of mistakes that way. On the Hot Porn site, save your story and preview it before submitting it to posting. The look and feel of the story is important for reader engagement. If it is physically hard to read, then people stop reading it.
       
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  6. bethsdream

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    all advise is welcome
     
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  7. bethsdream

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    ty again and ty for the help
     
    1. silenceisgolden
      Don't be put off by any negative ratings either ,most will be kind and like it ,but sometimes you get one or two who don't , more you post the better you will get
       
      silenceisgolden, Sep 15, 2020
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    ty
     
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    That was good. I particularly liked the self-discovery aspects of the story. It's nice to some character development amidst all the other stuff.
    I'll echo the others recommendations about formatting and spelling and grammar. Half of writing is revising. Given your story several good re-reads before posting it somewhere. It's nice to be published and read, but it's even better when comments are about the story and not the technical aspects.
    Hope you keep writing, looking forward to more of your stuff.
     
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  10. bethsdream

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    i wanted to try and write a sex story for a woman, and for the woman reading it to know what i'm saying and be able to feel like they are in the story, i've read some on here and felt like i couldn't connect to the story of feelings the author was trying to
    ty and i will take more time editing it , ty again for the reply
     
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  11. NCfan

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    Not entirely surprising. I'd say the majority of stories here are written by men, or men claiming to be women. I've asked in the past to have a woman read a story and let me know where I'm way off. Granted they're Hot Porn and most readers are men so there needs to be a certain level of exaggeration. Maybe look for some of the other female writers here. I've seen a few.
     
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    Here's another thing. I REALLY wish this forum allowed editing after the first few minutes. Even if only on the Story forum.

    I posted "Redemption" earlier and looking at it now I already see handful of fixes to make. I'll make them before posting on SexStories next week, but it nags at me that they're there.
     
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  13. Nellymcboatface

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    Just read it - nice, you've left us hanging !!
    Look forward to the next instalment.
     
  14. mfan2112

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    Did you see part 2? https://www.sexstories.com/story/97813/

    Give poor ole Dakota some love, she needs it.
     
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    1st comment ever, I have no idea where to begin
     
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      Welcome
       
      mfan2112, Sep 18, 2020
  16. NCfan

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    Welcome. Are you interested in writing or reading stories? Then you're in the right place. If you want to check out pics and gifs of every imaginable type of woman, and many men, the you need the pics and movies forum. If you'd like to discuss and/or read about a vast variety of sexual preferences, fetishes and more then the sexuality forum. I have no idea what goes on at the other forums.
     
    1. NCfan
      Also, don't be concerned. Your number of posts will be limited to a few per day until you hit (I think) 15.
       
      NCfan, Sep 18, 2020
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      I'm going to be posting my own stories.

      I've been writing for 6 years as a hobby, and I've got a lot to post :)
       
      Jon78.1, Sep 19, 2020
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    Are there any Sissy Boys / Trans / Shemales interested in helping me with a beta reading of a story I made up over a short break. ?
    I have 2 parts written with a third starting.
    It's suppose to be a straight take on a holiday romance, with a twist - hopefully.
    I want it to read romantically, not cum bucket style, although whilst I have some hot sex in it (or at least I think so) I want it to be sympathestic.
    being a Sissy curious straight guy, I don't have that experience to make it genuine and I dont want to offend..
    I want the sex to be realistic but also the issues within it.
    I want to include parts of being trans not really "understood / possibly not spoken about" by us "straight guys"
    Such as:
    Enema: & Condoms: I would assume with any anal sex ?
    Happy to collaborate and give credit where credit is due etc..
    To give you a style of my writing my current story lines that I've published is:
    https://www.sexstories.com/story/98196
     
  20. NCfan

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    I guess the discussion belongs up here. But suddenly I'm getting crap for helping/suggesting that a new writer on the board may want to correct spelling/grammar errors. Not from the writer mind you, but from other readers. Personally, I appreciated the people who let me know that readers on this board did care about such things.

    My first thoughts here was that it was just porn writing, who cares? But I learned differently and have worked to improve my writing.
     
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      I am right (or is it write) there with you NCFan. I cringe when I find them in my own work. (like I found today in Daddy's Escort, UGH!, I will take it down, fix and re-post it. Stupid little things....)

      We should all strive to do better.
       
      mfan2112, Sep 22, 2020
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    2. Nellymcboatface
      It is hard, I wrote, reread, edited, rewrote, edited my first stories, I thought to death, now re-visiting them a few things make me cringe and some I realise could have been constructed better.
      mfan has helped me with some proof reading and my story reads a lot better and it has helped me see where I can expand and improve - keep on persevering, onward and upward to better writing and more fantasies !
      All the best
       
      Nellymcboatface, Sep 23, 2020