I’m taking someone’s advice and sharing with the blue room. Hope you like it, appreciate feedback, so here’s part 1 of at least 4(part one is mostly exposition).



I’m driving late on the highway, when I see a car pulled over on the side of the road with the hood up. I pull over to see if I can help. Arriving on scene, I come upon a beautiful young woman, screaming into her cel phone. I can’t make out everything, but she is swearing at someone for not coming and helping her. Hesitantly I get out and see if I can help.
Anyway I can help, I ask
Startled she looks at me a little scared, holds up a finger as if to say one second, and then yells back into the phone, “now someone is here and is gonna probably kill me you lazy fuck”. And hangs up the phone.
“Sorry car is broken down, and fucking husband doesn’t care, and won’t come help me” she says as she starts to cry a little.
“I can’t do anything about the husband, but let’s see what I can do about the car”
She smiles a little says thanks, and directs me to the front of her car. I look under the hood, seeing oil everywhere I quickly realize it’s not a problem that can be fixed here and now.
“Sorry to say but you have big problems under here, and the car needs to be towed to your mechanic, do you have AAA”
She really breaks down now and starts crying now, shaking her head no. “Fuck, fuck, fuck, stupid piece of shit” she yells and kicks her car. Not being able to resist a damsel in distress, I try come to her rescue.
“Look, not sure if you’re interested, I have Triple A, I can get your car towed to the next town. Would you like that, or just a ride somewhere, I can help if you like, or I can leave”
She pauses for a sec, and reluctantly says”that’s very generous, I would appreciate that”
“No problem, it won’t cost me any extra, just hang tight” I say as I pull out my phone and call. I give the info of the car, where it is and where to take it.

“Alright your set up, they did say it was gonna be an hour at least, so you can wait here or I could drive you into town, you could get a bite to eat or something, or you’re can wait with your car”

Unsure she says something to eat would be nice. “Okay hop in, my name is Blake by the way”.”everyone calls me S.P.” She replies.
“Nice to meet you, let’s get you some grub”

Almost as soon as we start to drive SP, goes on a tirade about her husband. What a ungrateful piece of shit he is, an asshole, idiot, and on and on. SP continues then stops in her tracks apologizing, saying how I’ve been so nice and shouldn’t have to deal with this. I look over at her, seeing distraught she is, can’t help but feel for her, at the same time this is the first time I realize how hot this girl is, dirty blonde hair, with curves in all the right places.
“I’m just trying to help, vent if you need to, but I admit if I had a wife as attractive as you I wouldn’t leave her stranded on the side of the road” I say just as we pull into the gas station, the car would be coming to.
After my flirt, she looks over at me with a sly smile.”thank you for everything, you’re my hero and I barely know you” she exclaimed” but I think my hero needs a reward”. She said this while rubbing her hand up my thigh straight to my cock.”plus I can get back at my husband at the same time so we both win”
My was growing with every inch her hand moved up, I knew there was a reason I do good deeds. But know it’s time for the devil to come out. “ okay SP I’m game but on two conditions, 1 you listen to any instruction I give you and obey, within reason, if you’re uncomfortable just say the word meatloaf. And 2 you call your husband, while we get it on. You can tell him or not what your doing, I don’t care, but I want to hear you have a conversation with while you’re sucking and fucking me.”
SP mouth drops, but you could also see her get heated as I described what I wanted. Lust started to fill her eyes. She looks at me and says “yes sir”
“Good, take my cock out, call your husband, and start sucking”

 

Please continue, like where this is going

 

Good start not bad writing

 

Great start

 

Thanks for the feedback, here’s part 2.


I slide over a little on the bench seat, while SP undoes my belt. She slides my pants and underwear to my knees, and grabs a hold of my cock. Stroking it up and down, getting it even harder, she starts to suck the tip continuing to stroke it getting my cock nice and slick. “Okay call your husband, and fuck it put it on speaker”.
Getting really into she dials the number and puts it on speaker as she was told. She sucks me while it rings.
“Hey” her husband answered
She pulls off me to respond”hey asshole, thanks for all your help” she yells and then goes back down on me.
They start a back and forth, what was he supposed to do from his point of view, and how he should just do it because she wanted him to from hers. All the while SP kept giving me an amazing blowjob. Wet, sloppy, swirling her tongue around the tip, going up and down with her mouth, while stroking me at the same time. It took everything not to make a noise. At one point her husband asks what the noise was that he was hearing.
“What I got some food from the gas station, idiot, I got myself a lollipop, fuck”!! Covering up the slurping noises she was making on my dick. The fucking idiot just dismissed it. SP goes directly to a deep throat gagging on my dick, almost begging him to call her out again. I’m getting close to cumming, but I don’t want the fun to stop.

I grab her by the hair and pull her off my cock, she stares into my eyes silently understanding we are changing things up. I lay SP on her back, while she keeps talking to her husband. I raise her shirt up, and place tiny kisses on her mid drift, at the same time undoing her jeans. SP’s breathing gets heavy with anticipation, as I lower her jeans and underwear below her knees and off her legs. I stare at one of the most beautiful pussies I’ve ever seen, absolutely glistening in wetness. SP’s legs are trembling as I bring my lips steadily closer to her honeypot. The conversation with hubby is almost incoherent at this point, with the anticipation of me licking those juicy lips.

 

ok good part 2 now take it to a finish and think about chapter 2

 

Part - 3.

I continue to tease her licking all around her pussy, lightly touching it with my tongue every once and a while. SP is practically shaking with anticipation. The phone call at this point, is a lot of “ huh, what, oh yeah, uh huh” and him going “are you okay”. I decide at this point to turn up the heat.

I start a long slow lick, from the bottom of her pussy all the way up to her clit. Her breath quickened with inch I licked, when hit her clit, she let out a scream of pleasure. Her husband, panicked and asked what was wrong, she was quick and said she stunned her toe, I looked at her and smiled, and then went back to her pussy.

I started to pay a lot of attention to her clit, and SP starts going crazy, writhing in pleasure. SP is literally biting her lip to stop from moaning and screaming. I lift my head and grab the phone out of her hand. She looks at me worried, but I just set it on the dashboard. I slide up to kiss her, and let her taste herself. I lean by her ear and whisper, “ spread those pussy lips for me, I’m want to attack your pussy”.

I start crawling back down to her pussy, and as instructed, she has spread those pussy lips open pushing that enlarged clit forward. I attack it like it’s my last meal, licking it and sucking it, the way her body is moving I feel like she is going to cum soon. I’m hitting her sweet spot, and the thought of her husband had completely left her conscience, as she starts moaning, screaming, saying oh my god over and over as her climax is coming on.

Even though it’s hard, with some idiot continuing to ask what’s going on, I double my efforts on her clit, and stick a couple fingers in her pussy, stimulating that engorged g-spot. This pushes her over the edge. She screams, pulsates, and nearly crushes my head with thighs as she orgasms. We both sorta come to with her husband yelling “hello” into the phone.

SP picks up the phone and starts yelling at her husband “ what’s going on is, I have a lazy stupid husband. So the guy that helped me out with AAA, and a ride, got rewarded by me with a blowjob, then he just ate me out and gave me the best orgasm of my life, and now judging by his hard cock he’s about to fuck me. You happy? that’s whats going on”. “Yah right SP” he retorts. “Believe me or not, listen or not, I don’t care, but it’s happening” she declares.

Well no need to be quiet anymore. “Get over here and sit on my cock SP” I say as an eerie silence fills the truck cabin.


I haven’t written part 4 yet, might take me a while, but I’ll get to it.

 

I can’t believe it’s been over a year, I completely forgot about it. Finally finished it, hope you like the ending.


SP slides over and straddles my lap. She grabs my cock and points at the entrance of her dripping wet pussy. We both let out a sigh as she slides down the length of my hardness. We pause for a moment, me just enjoying the feel of her pussy, and she was adjusting to me inside her and what she was about to do. She leans in and whispers in my ear “don’t cum in me”. Then pulls back and stairs into my eyes to make sure I understand. I nod, and then reach up with my hand, and forcefully grab her hair. Staring back into those beautiful eyes, letting her know that’s the last order she’ll make tonight.


She gives an erotic “yessss” as I grab her hair, and starts to ride my cock. We are starting to lose ourselves in the pleasure of our fucking, when we are reminded that we aren’t alone in the car. Her husband speaks up on the phone “seriously SP, is this a fucking joke”. “It’s no joke, He’s already made me cum once, and if you’d shut up, I’m gonna cum all over his cock” she barks back. It’s like she is feeling powerful after her snap back, so she almost doubles her efforts, and is really bouncing up and down, as grab that ass to help her please me.


“Please stop SP, Please stop!!!” He pleads, in an almost defeated tone. She doesn’t miss a beat and continues her rabid pace of bouncing on me. “Can’t stop” she pants “ it feels so good, he’s gonna make me cum again!!” Its obviously she’s close, so I let her ass go, take one hand and grab her hair again, and take the other one and choke her lightly, guiding her lips to mine for a passionate kiss.


I stare into her eyes, still with my firm grasp of her, “ Are you gonna cum? Are you gonna cum all over my cock?” I ask. “Yes” she replies in ecstasy “yes”. “Cummm” I command “cum for me baby, cum hard for me”. The words barely escape me as she starts to writhe in her orgasm. Grinding on my cock, gripping me and the seat, as her body tenses up, and shudders in wave after wave of pleasure. She collapses into me, coming back to earth, “please tell me this over” a broken voice come over the speaker.


“Not yet” I retort “ get off me and clean your cum off my cock” I order her. She is eager to please me, and return the favor. She devours my cock with our juices mixed together. I’m enjoying the sight of this beautiful woman cleaning my cock, but I want a bit more pussy before I blow my load. “ Get up, get on your knees on the bench seat” she quickly jumps up, knowing exactly what was coming. Amazing sight, seeing her push her ass to the sky, one quick spank just in case she forgot who was boss. A shiver is sent up her spine, as I line up my cock into that awaiting pussy.


As enter that velvet pussy, it is clear to me that I will not last long, the heightened experience as me on the verge. “I’m gonna come soon baby” I say “ when I tell you, turn around and finish me with your mouth”. “Yes sir” was her only reply which made my cock even harder if that’s possible. I grab her hips, and really start fucking the pussy. Not that I’m even aware of her husband at this point, but might of been quite the show, with our skin audibly smacking together. I can’t take anymore “ I’m gonna cum baby!!”. Like a flash, she extracts herself from me, spins around, and locks her mouth on my cock. Three or four stokes of fucking that stunning face is all it takes, as I send rope after rope of hot cum in her mouth.


She tries escape her mouth off my cock, “hold it in there a second baby”. She does as she’s told, letting these last spasms of finish, while I give her a mouth some final tiny thrusts of my cock. Our eyes are locked as I finally withdraw my member, not surprising, a bit of cum dribbles from her mouth, but there was so much who could blame her. My turn to collapse now in the seat,as I reflect on this amazing experience. Reality starts to set back in seemingly all at once, as we start straightening up, we notice the fogged windows, the tow truck with her car, and the phone on the dash, that now has some heavy breathing coming from it. We turn to each other with wide eyes and a smile on each others face, “Looks like you might be okay baby, I think he enjoyed it”. I say. “ Good, maybe we could do this again?” She replies with a smile, just as she presses end on the call, and exists the car

 

Good finish, thanks mate

 

Great story, well written!

 

Mm I’m throbby ♥️