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  1. 1142jr

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    This is fiction, this is my first story, and I have more of the story to write. Please let me know what you think. Be kind please...

    The New Neighbors
    After living in a small town for around 30 years my wife took a job an hour away in the city. I was ready to move anyway so we bought a house about 10 miles from her work and we moved. We have been here a year and we have great neighbors everyone kept to themselves for the most part. Chat when we saw each other outside and things like that.

    Tom, my neighbor on the right side of our home caught me outside and told me that he was going to be moving. He found a smaller place where he wouldn't have to work as hard to keep it up and that he sold his house to his niece. Her name was Donna. She had just been through a rough divorce and her settlement was not bad. She had enough to purchase his house and she would be moving in a couple of weeks. He continued to tell me Donna has 2 daughters Dawn and Charlotte. We chatted for a little bit and then I had to get back to my projects.

    Donna moved in as planned and was very nice and open person. We had her and the girls over for a cook out and got to know each other a little. It seemed that they were all happy about the divorce and moving to the city. As we sat and ate and had some wine. Donna told us a little about their past but nothing too revealing, just that her x was not in the picture any longer and they were better for it. She told us her only regret was the fact that her girls would not have the influence of a man in their lives. My wife said that I would be happy to help with anything that I could. I said of course, and that seemed to make the girls very happy. I told my wife later that night how it surprised me when she volunteered me. She told me that she felt sorry for them. She said that she didn't think much of it and rolled over and fell asleep.

    Time marched on and true to my word I did help when needed. I always referred to all three of then as "the girls" it seemed natural. At first I felt a little guilty, the girls were all "lookers" and I would often fantasize about them. But my wife just seemed to see it as us being good neighbors, so I figured that there was nothing wrong with a little fantasy.

    Donna was in her early 30's and was a real beauty. She was medium height with perfect 34 B/C cups and tight little body that made them seem bigger. She was a touchy feely kind of person that I really enjoyed. She always brought a smile to my face when I would see her. She would always smile back and it would melt me.

    One day while my wife was on a business trip, I was in my shop cleaning up after making the girls their own wall desks for their rooms. I had finished them and installed them along with monitors and small thin clients with mouse and keyboards. I had connect them to my WiFi and was serving virtual machines so they could save money. Anyway, I was cleaning up my shop and Donna came bounding up just glowing. "thank you so much!" she said as she threw her arms around me and jumped into my arms. She kissed me on the cheek two or three times and then let go. "We love our new desks. Dawn and Charlotte said that it felt like Christmas." I told her that it was my pleasure to help "my girls". Donna went on and on about how it will be so nice to all have their own workstation to do homework and other things online. I raised an eyebrow when she said "other things" and winked at her. She smiled big and blushed a little and when on. After so many conversations we were very comfortable with each other and a little tease or a little flirt here and there were completely normal and comfortable. I had told her that I would put some parental blocks on the girls workstations so she would not have to worry about them going places where they shouldn't go. She said, "that would be fine for Charlotte but don't worry about it for herself and Dawn. I am very forthwith with my girls. Charlotte is still to young to care about such things but Dawn is reaching an age where she is curious. I want her to feel free and open to discover and ask questions openly with those she trusts" I told her that was very progressive and nice to hear. We had many conversations about relationships and I had told her in the past about my wife's prudish ways and it may be a good idea to be a little less open with her. I told her that it impressed me the way she dealt with things openly with her daughters.

    Then Donna paused and brought the conversation down to a little more serious level. "I want to warn you, I think that Dawn will be coming to you with some questions." "really?" I said. She continued, "Yes, well she has been starting to ask about sex and sexuality and has some questions about men and women. I of course told her my women’s perspective. I told her that she should also talk with a man she trusted about it and she asked if she could talk with you." now it was my turn to start blushing. Donna's statement threw me off guard a little. "Donna, this is a very unusual request, but I am happy to help and I appreciate you giving me a little advanced warning."

    All this talk about her daughters questions made me excited and when Donna jumped into my arms again and kissed me, this time on the lips, she slide back to the ground slowly feeling my boner pressed against her body. Staring deep into my eye she told me she knew that Dawn picked the right man to talk to. She stayed pressed against me for a moment and I believe I actually felt her pull in and rub against my hard on with her pussy before letting me go. This was next level flirting and it was exciting and hot but I played it as cool as I could and as she turned to leave I swatted her on her ass playfully and told her she better behave, she was playing with fire. She turned and said, "I like fire. I am going to go in and do a little research on my new workstation about that fire." then blew me a kiss and went back to her house. All I could think was, what am I getting myself into.

    About an hour later Dawn came out of her house, much like her mother did. She was the spitting image of a younger version of her mother. She was also very thin and had A/B sized tits. I had already known that Dawn speaks her mind whenever she is around me. She has told me about her friends and what they tell her about sex but she never really asked me any questions. She was full of fun and laughter. She came into my shop and gave me a big hug around my waist and told me how happy she was with her new workstation. She couldn't believe how fast it was and that she was able to have it for her very own. "Well, I have to take care of my girls now don't I?" I said and she hugged me again hard. Even though I was soft, I could feel her press up against my body and it was all I felt myself get aroused.

    She finally pulled away and said, " Mom told me that she talked with you about my wanting to ask you some very personal questions." I told her, "Yes she did, and I told her how honored I am that you would want to ask me. I appreciate your trust and friendship." She smiled big and blushed and said, " Okay, tell me about penises...I know all the basics that Mom told me and in school but tell me about them really...How big are they? how do they get hard? are they really that sensitive? What does circumcised and uncircumcised mean? What... ", I threw my hands up stopping her. "Hold up, I am not taking notes. I will answer all your questions one at a time. Lets just go to the patio and I will tell you all about it."

    She grabbed my hand and pulled me out of the shop. I have a patio out on the side of my shop it is comfortable and a nice place to sit and visit without prying eyes. We sat down and she sat beside me all squirmy and excited. "Okay” I said, “tell you about penises...well they are a one-eyed monster that eats up little girls." I said jokingly as I tickled her. She giggled and said, "I know better than that, I am serious, I want to know everything about them and sex so the girls at school won't make fun of me." "Okay, okay, just trying to lighten the mood a little. You know the official word penis, but do you know other words for it?" I asked, "Sure" she said, "cock, dick, peter, rod, flagpole, member, pecker, prick..." it was interesting as she rattled off her list. No embarrassment or trepidation whatsoever. "sounds like you already know a lot about dicks, tell me more specifically what you want to know." I Said. Then she became hesitant and then said. " Well, to tell you the truth I really want to see one up close and touch it and feel it. I told mom and that's when she told me that I needed to talk with someone that I trusted. I know you love me and would never hurt me or mislead me about anything. I feel very safe with you and want to...see your...d...dick."

    WOW I thought. I am really getting in too deep. I promised that I would talk with Dawn and it seems like her mother left out the part about show and tell so to speak. I understood what she was saying though. She didn't want to be hit on or attacked, she was exploring and wanting to know things that just couldn't be provided by her mom. I swallowed hard and said, "You know Dawn, I understand why you are asking this, and I want to help. I am a little afraid though. You know what you are asking is very wrong in the eyes of society. If it got out that I helped you with this, I could go to jail for a very very long time." "Oh I won't tell a soul pops! I swear. I trust you more than anyone else I know. You won't lie to me to get into my pants. You won't take advantage of me. I want you to teach me." I was getting very excited and aroused and Dawn was looking between my face and dick. Did Donna really know what Dawn was going to ask me? Did she know that her daughter wanted to see and touch my dick? "Come on Pops, I promise...PLEASE?"

    “Well, I promised your mother and I promised you so yes, you can see it and touch it too?" she giggled As I leaned back and open my pants and my dick being hard was ready and burst out. "OH MY GOD!" she gasps. Now I am not huge, I am not going to write how I have a monster cock. I am average 6-7 inches and pretty thick but to her and it being the first one she has had presented to her, I am sure it was intense.

    She stared at it and looked back up at me and asked to touch it. I told her sure she can touch it. She reached out her hand and felt the tip of my head with her finger tip. My pre cum was flowing and she felt that and then rubbed it around on my dick head. She giggled and asked if I were cumming and I told her no, that is pre cum, what is used to make it slick for sex. She looked up at me with intention to ask something but she resisted and looked back at my hard cock. She continued to touch me and let the pre cum gather on her finger tip and then she rubbed it between her fingers. She then smelled at it and gathered some more and tasted it. She looked up at me and smiled and then did something I would have never guest. She stuck her tongue out and licked the head of my dick and gathered up as much of my pre cum as she could and tasted it again. "I didn't get enough to taste before." she said when she looked up and saw the surprised expression on my face.

    I regrouped and asked her, "Well, so tell me what you think?" She now had both hands on my dick and was rubbing it all over. Turning it from side to side and also examining my balls. " I LOVE it she said, It looks strong, it makes me feel like I supposed to love it. I like the taste of your pre cum too even though it doesn't really have much taste. Is that what cum tastes like?" "Well, I think that might need to be another lesson. I think that this has been an exciting enough time right now." She frowned and pouted a beautiful little pout and said okay, then she rubbed my dick one more time and kissed it on the head a few times and tried to suck out some more pre cum. Then she put it back in my pants and I zipped and buttoned up.

    "Well, what did you think about your first penis?" I asked. "OMG Pops, I LOVED it. I can't wait for our next lesson." She said before she kissed me on the lips and slipped a little tongue to me. Then she ran back to her house. I sat there still trying to soak in what had just happened. While I was there, Donna came around the corner. I worried what she was going to say. Before I could stand up Donna sat straight down on my lap and kissed me full on as she ground her damp pussy on my cock. After a minute or two she stopped and pulled away. "I am so thankful for you!" she continued, "I knew you would be the right man for the job. She told me all about her first lesson. I am proud of her for telling you what she really wanted and I love you for showing her." I stuttered a little and told her I was very afraid, but I promised." "Oh Pops, you are absolutely safe. No one will find out." then she kissed me again grinding on my lap the entire time. We finally cam up for air and then she said, "now, let's talk about her next lesson she wants to know how to give a blowjob and what cum taste like..."
     
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  2. NCfan

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    A good first effort. There are some grammatical and/or typo issues, but not many. Believe it or not people will care about that. The format is easy to read so that's good.

    Be careful of ages so you don't get blocked if you post over on SexStories. I don't think you mentioned anything specific, but I can see where this may be going.
     
    1. 1142jr
      Thanks. I left the ages off on purpose so I will edit that up. I checked the typos and ran it though some testing software to edit passive voice so I was pretty confident. but I will check again. Thanks.
       
      1142jr, Sep 21, 2020
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      Believe me, it seems no matter how many times I re-read mine I find something. That's why professional writers hire professional editors.
       
      NCfan, Sep 21, 2020
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      that's true. I am no professional though. just though up a story and hoped that someone likes it.
       
      1142jr, Sep 21, 2020
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      Oh neither am I. I've just been posting here the past few months.
       
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    I dont understand why the first thing other people mention is grammar crap..I read it and didn't notice anything wrong.. I come here to read great Hot Porn not to grade papers.
    Look dude it was a great sex story , really don't worry about all these internet teachers.. just continue writing your great stories..honestly I'm sick and tired of every new writer they run off instead of just enjoying their free time from writing..
     
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    I'm merely alerting him to what he will face here. The fact that you can't detect a spelling or grammar error doesn't mean others can't or won't. If the author intends to post future stories here and/or on SexStories he will get a better response if his stories are well written and contain fewer errors. If people are going to spend their time reading AND if you hope to get comments, it's better to proofread.

    I said nothing insulting to the writer of this story.
     
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    Its not about being insulting.. they spend hours writing it and all they get from is grammar grade like its a college essay.. they stop writing because we not here for that crap, is all im saying..like I said I don't notice grammar errors.. I guess I try to get more into the story than grading papers..some of the best music doesn't have excellent grammar so why does these stories have to...
     
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    Actually I like these these real like stories more than a perfect written ones.. I guess they spend more time with the fun of the story than correcting the grammar...
     
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    Let's not fill his thread with this. There's the Author's Lounge thread stuck at the top for discussion. I'm just trying to help him because, despite what YOU think, there are a lot of people here who prefer a story without formatting, grammar or spelling errors. Everything isn't a text with cute shortcuts. A person shouldn't be embarrassed to use correct grammar.
     
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  8. ETMMMMM

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    Good beginning
     
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    Continue please
     
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    Dude, great story! If you want someone’s help to right BETTER, I think you would ask.
    Keep the BS comments for when they are requested!
    Good first story!
     
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    He asked what we thought. I told him. We even had a perfectly civilized exchange in the comments right on this thread. Why are people getting so bitchy about this? I said nothing to offend him.
     
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    Thanks, 1142jr, for a great sexy read!! I loved the turn of events and the ending. I also appreciated that you gave us a story that had sex not just sex.

    I am in agreement with NCfan about spelling and grammar and, although I am new to xnxx Hot Porn, I am not new to writing in this genre. My motto for myself is to clean it up, except for the content, of course! ;)

    PLEASE keep writing and posting. I know I will keep reading and enjoying--and I enjoyed masturbating to this one! So, thank you for that too! :)
     
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      Great to hear from you bboop6969. I am glad you liked it. and very glad you could get off to it. I will try my best to keep it as clear from errors as possible.
       
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  13. 1142jr

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    Thank you all for the encouragement. don't beat up NCfan, I know that I am not perfect. as I said, I ran it though several checks but of course that was not perfect. either. I don't like reading stories with huge typos too. He was very gracious to share and try to help. I will say I hope whatever the errors you all can look past them and I will do my best to proof the best I can. check out part 2. https://xxxbestrank.mobi/s__forum/threads/new-neighbors-lessons-continue.604108/
    It is in this section but for some reason is not posting on sexstories.com I am not getting any errors or issues. It is just hanging out there.
     
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    Stories on Sexstories can take 2-3 days to be available for readers. They run them through an edit process to check for things not allowed on the site. Mostly age related.
     
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    Thank you all for the encouragement. don't beat up NCfan, I know that I am not perfect. as I said, I ran it though several checks but of course that was not perfect. either. I don't like reading stories with huge typos too. He was very gracious to share and try to help. I will say I hope whatever the errors you all can look past them and I will do my best to proof the best I can. check out part 2. https://xxxbestrank.mobi/s__forum/threads/new-neighbors-lessons-continue.604108/
    It is in this section but for some reason is not posting on sexstories.com I am not getting any errors or issues. It is just hanging out there.[/QUOTE]

    Perfection is in our imperfections!! And, you are so right --even the computers can't achieve perfection so we shouldn't even try as not one of us can claim perfection, in our writing or anything else. All we can do is our best, as you said. Definitely was able to look past any errors in the story, because you crafted one that held my interest and attention, not to mention my pussy hostage!! ;)

    Appreciate your pointing us in the right direction for New Neighbors Lessons continued.

    Any chance I can get the inside scoop on when Part 3 will be available--I am so into this and I don't do delayed gratification well! ha ha ha
    Finally, a big thank you for re-inspiring me to get back to my own stories to post.... :)
     
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      well, i have the seeded thought of part 3 and wrapping it up. It has been great to try my hand at this, but it does take some time away from my job. I should have it out in a few days. Thank you for all the encouragement. I will keep writing.
       
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    Really good story! I will definitely be reading the next chapter to see what happens. :)
     
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      Mmmm yesss sexy
       
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    I loved this story as I am very attracted to older men. This story would have been wonderful when I was developing and first discovering my own sexuality. You would have been the perfect man to teach me a proper lesson as well.
     
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      Love it baby girl
       
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    Thank you darling. I wish I would have been.
     
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