Thanks NCfan, I voted on yours as well

 

Fellow authors, what do you find works best when describing how a woman is dressed in your stories? Particularly when she is wearing lingerie? I have a clothing / shoe / lingerie fetish so I totally have a very concrete idea in my mind what the lady is wearing, to the point where I find pictures that are like what I am thinking and save them to a word doc. But I am somewhat at odds with myself about how detailed to write it into the story and then how best to write it. Any advice?

 

I think describing lingerie helps since it is part of the erotic scene you're building. Every day clothes less so unless it's leading somewhere.

 

Yes. Care about what you're writing. Make it obvious that you're writing with passion. Often times what someone is wearing, or what to focus on, isn't as important as how it is being described, who it's being described by, and how clear the desire for the character is, whether that's from the narrator or a first-person perspective.

 

Hello Friends, some of you might have noticed I pulled down my 6 parts of Megan and Kyle. I was called out, and rightfully so, by a number of people for bad spelling/grammar and a need for proofreading. I have been working on cleaning it up but wondering if there might be someone willing to help a new author with some proofreading. I am willing to swap editing services.

In case you are wondering the 6 parts run about 27,300 words, or 49 pages.
Thank you all for your consideration.

 

Mystery down-voting by others is a problem on this site. Unfortunate but true.

 

Sorry learning this forum system hit the wrong reply. Is there a delete?

 

Hi everyone.

I've been posting on this site for a while now (and I've posted on others) and have seen a issues with voting everywhere. I try to keep a low profile, because doing otherwise can piss people off. I don't want to piss people off. I just want to publish my humble stories and have them fairly considered. I try to be a good contributor. I vote my conscience and hope everyone else does too.

Here are a few observations from lurking around a while. They are well intended. Please take them as such. They are not my actions, just my observation.

1. Take time to proof your work. Over and over. I re-read a story many, many, times and still make typos. Bad grammar and too many typos are a turn off (or no paragraph separation. I don't bother to read it, I just move on). Try a different format before you publish. Get a different perspective and go from Word to Notepad, for example.
2. Many people vote on genre. If I post a gay story, it may never end up on the front page or hang around there for long. Same with other genres. It may be voted on without the voter even reading it. I'm not into water-sports, so I don't' read them. But, I don't vote them down. To each their own.
3. If you complain about voting, you may be reminded you are not the all time greatest author on earth and may even be voted down for spite. People have been driven off of the site after seeing stories repeatedly buried. So, some advice, never brag "I had ten stories on the main page and they suddenly disappeared! People tell me I'm the best porn writer ever! So, I know my stories are the greatest? What happened?"
4. Authors are attention hogs. We want our story read. We want comments and positive feedback for all the work we put into the stories we don't get paid for. To that end, I've seen authors on this site make a positive comment how they love my story, but give a negative vote. It was a simple mistake, right? Or were they so used to down voting others, they forgot they were signed on? I wish this did not occur, but it does. A while ago, a good story on this site was typically rated in the mid 90%, now it is the low 90% and often keeps sinking until it is off the front page.
5. If you see a story at the top of the front page too long, it may slowly be driven down.
6. If you have see an author with a few stories on the front page, realize they are consuming valuable real estate from the other authors. Some do not like that. I've experienced it. I therefore try to write one longer story, instead of five, three chapter quickies.
7. If you don't allow anonymous votes, some authors have burner accounts and will vote you down. And, it takes less votes to do it.

I trust the public and my fellow authors to vote a story up if they like it and hope that is enough. I wish we could all do the same.

Peace, health, and happiness to you all,

Most humbly,

UU

(now returning to lurk-mode)

 

New guy here. I love to wright fan fic, incest and murder/rape stories. and working on other topics as well. One question so far. I was looking around trying to figure out the site and have mostly. My question is I came across no PEDO stories and I know I have read stories with under 18 in them. What is considered PEDO?

 

I have read stories featuring 13 year old girls and boys. Is there a minimum on age like 6 or 8 years?

 

Do you other writers think it's better to wait to post more stories on sexstories.com if your current newest ones are doing well? I wonder if I overloaded with Naked Day chapters because it was all new to me.

I still have the Epilogues to post there and one or two other stories I'm working on. Will posting new stuff have people skipping the previous ones? What do you think?

 

I've read a couple of your stories and I think you can wait a couple days before putting a new one out because they are a quick read. If you ever consider writing a longer form story wait a week or two in between so the first story can get some traction. It's a tricky balance because you want the reader to have some anticipation but you don't want them waiting too long.

Take it from me. I know... LOL

 

One thing I'll say is, I have no idea what people like. Hah. I sorted the Naked Day stories on sexstories and the ones with the least views and lowest voting are some of the ones where I thought I was being "creative". I liked them but the world seemed pissed that I messed around with the characters. Or maybe they were just bored with the whole thing by then. It makes me wonder how the epilogue stories will be received. I may combine some of them into single longer posts.

 

Would someone please explain the math used to generate ratings? I have a story with a rating currently of 83.3%. However there are 6 votes (it was just released today) and 4 positive and 2 negative votes. None from registered users. Last I checked 4/6 = 66.67%. So how does this site get its numbers??? Really? It makes no sense. My inner math nerd to going crazy.....

 

The math is correct, but there is a bug in the system where once in a while a positive vote is displayed as negative. Instead of the 4+ and 2-, you really have 5+ and only 1-. It usually corrects itself in time.

 

So this is kind of a technical question to the moderators. I am totally fine with no pedo, I'm am actually on the same page with you with that. However how about births? One of my biggest fetishes is pregnant women. Is pictures (3d digitally created) images of women giving birth still part of that "no under age rule" if the baby is seen in the scene coming out of her vagina? And then what if there is a cock fucking that vagina while the baby is coming out? The cock isn't fucking the baby, just the women giving birth. Maybe there is 2 cocks helping hold her vagina open....Seriously.

 

What should I write about next? I've got almost all my writings that are here posted on sexstories.com. Just a couple of Naked Day Epilogues to go. It is kind of amusing that a couple of guys are annoyed that I keep posting them. Like they're forced to read them.

Some of the other stories are fairly popular. I'm not sure whether to try thinking of something new or continue one of the other stories. Either Trish Takes a Chance or Sisters at the Shore.

Do you writers go by what readers comment or just go by your own feelings?

 

I'm also looking for info on this.

Say, for examples I've got a story that starts with the MC recalling playing doctor as a child. They check out each others junk, they watch each other pee. Otherwise, no sex per se. Would this get my butt banned?

If I understand the spirit of this rule, we want to avoid posting anything that might even remotely turn on a pedophile. In that case, it's probably best to avoid underage characters entirely, even in short flashback sequences, right? Kind of sad, though, as so much of a character's personality is formed by their earliest sexual experiences.

Would love to read the thoughts of others. Thanks.

 

all your stories fucking suck

 

Your stories are especially ass.